As we discussed in the class critique of your composition, the directions of your event and performers text tend to pull against one another. Also, your interpretation of the groupings in not correct (as well as the order of words in the band name). Your separation of the text into logical groups here is good overall, however I question your choice in center aligning the text. We will discuss the advantages of lining visual elements and type to the grid in the coming classes.
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As we discussed in the class critique of your composition, the directions of your event and performers text tend to pull against one another. Also, your interpretation of the groupings in not correct (as well as the order of words in the band name). Your separation of the text into logical groups here is good overall, however I question your choice in center aligning the text. We will discuss the advantages of lining visual elements and type to the grid in the coming classes.
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